Thread: One of my works

Hello people.... wanted to share a poem i wrote for someone unknown

OBLIVION

A beauty in orange,
The color of the setting sun
Leaves me bewildered
For i remain in oblivion

Who is she??

They say not knowing is bliss
Though true--
But oh how wrong they are
Whom this dame gave a miss..

She stares at me,
Her friends by her side
She looks on in joy
Again oblivious to the misery
It would cause a boy!

The mona lisa smile
Is something so cold and baffling say they might,
Then how could one on this lass
Send someone basking
In its warmth-day n night..

She might not've considered
Many days after time froze
Would be a helpless being
Entrapped in an unknown world
Because of a rose!

Her black dark eyes
Which would even shame
The deep hallows of space
Now look upon me
--they try to speak to me
But i'm not from a world, Alas!
Where one would be so bestowed
As to speak to in time, a frozen lass.


************ © Prabhat Kaushik

I wrote it for a gal that was in a pic on my comp...

Wow, thats really impressive Starry! Honestly its very good, you got some good talent, keep it up! You never know you may become very famous one day with your poems!

thats just too kind of u Preeti... thanks...

not many poetic people here i see...

Ive got a friend who likes writing poems, will post one of her poems here!

nice poem pal, keep it up.

There comes a time when I think to myself, why is it me!
Why is it me that causes grief
Why do I make him suffer
Why is it me that makes him unhappy

Although I try my best to make him smile
It turns out wrong
The love I give, never shows
I care for that special person, he doesn't know

Am I an extra or just a waste
Will anything I do for ever matter
Can I ever make things better


This is written by a friend of mine, and is just one fo her works!

thats a nice poem.. can u hook me up with her?

Shes older than you, would that be ok?

Did you seriously like it then, or was it a joke? If you did i will post some more of her poems if you want!

One of my friend wrote this poem in her blog when she brokeup with her boyfriend... I liked it very much...

Layers

There were thin,
very thin,
layers,
beneath the skin.

Layers of hues
that were shut out
by a colourblind love.

Layers invisible
to the naked eye
that wants to see
only what it believes.

Srcape them,
one by one.
They are nothing but a veil.

I know with each layer
of your skin
more blood will ooze
from within me.

But now take off that veil
and let me see the face of truth.
For each uncovering layer
reveals the real you.

nobody exactly know what transpired in between them... That guy went to Australia for higher studies... She was waiting for him... And he also appeared that he was all hers even while he was down under... But things changed when he came back to India... They brokeup... and he was arranged in a marriage by his parents after a while... :sad:

btw, ur poem was very creative... sud I send u one pic of mine?

who you talking to Mad?

Actually StarryKnight replied and deleted it after I posted the poem... And the stuffs I was saying was to him only... Its a reply to his deleted post...
Did u like the poem?

yeh its nice!

I think its a shame that people are not much into poems now!

Wow...just read it man.
Great talent..hope to see more of your works.
Good luck.

Btw...I suck at writing poems...the thoughts just don't flow.
Stories are better for me.

Originally Posted by powerdoc

Wow...just read it man.
Great talent..hope to see more of your works.
Good luck.

Btw...I suck at writing poems...the thoughts just don't flow.
Stories are better for me.

thanks dude..

Keep it up.